First Place: Sun and Moon By Allison Moh (Gr. 6)
The melancholy moon will always chase the bright sun rays
No matter how hard the bitter moon tries to steal the joyful sun’s light
They never seem to be able to grasp it
The bitter moon’s shadows are sent out during the day
No matter how hard the shadows try to grasp a bit of light
The light will always evade their clutches
The blazing sun brightens people’s day
The bright sun rays give out hope and joy in people’s heart
The light chases out darkness when the time is right
No matter how hard the the moon tries to steal the sun’s light
The light will always defend and defy the darkness
Second Place: An Escape from the Sun (After bp Nichol’s “A Path to the Moon”) by Amelia Chu (Gr. 7)
Still a long way to go,
as I walk step by step, covered in sweat.
The air is moist and humid,
I start to breathe heavily
as I feel my hands wrinkle and crinkle,
there's a road to my house
coming back from the sun.
You follow the twisted path
to pass several magma rocks or so,
Follow the fireflies like stars in the sky,
guiding you to the right.
Peer over the mushrooms
past the rabbits
and bunnies hopping along
the three great stumps.
Listen for the roar of the bear
and you’ll know to take another
right turn.
Soon I’ll be back to my home sweet home
where I can dream,
I imagine as I feel the blazing heat
stroking my back,
I ventured out to the sun
only to find myself escaping,
the bright orange colour
popping in my eyes,
this is the secret to finding
your way back to my home
I yearn to see again,
but still a long ways to go.
Third Place: Why try more in life? by Roselyn Tam (Gr. 7)
Life is only great if you make it.
Is something I’d never state
I hate other’s success.
Striving to be better
Is pointless
Relying on others
Is my way of finding success
Working harder
Won’t benefit
In the end
Not working to my full extent
Is something so simple
Trying your best
Is something I don't believe in
Being irresponsible and selfish
Are what people say I am
Confident and independent
Is what people expect of me
Perfection
No one’s perfect
Rest and take breaks
I’ve let myself
Fall down the rabbit hole of laziness
I won’t
Admit my shortcomings and change
I try to
Find shortcuts
I don’t
Listen to constructive criticism and take corrections
There’s an empty void inside of me
Without confidence
Avoiding the problem will solve it
I don’t think
Life can be so much more
Why try more in life?
Honourable Mention: The Drowner (after Mary Oliver’s “The Swimmer”) By Aisha Hsu (Gr. 7)
Winter water
Crashes on the shore
Engulfing the bony
Branch of your body
You sink downwards,
Struggling for air.
You dream to leave this frenzy.
The luminous undertow
Holds secrets so deep
That none has ever heard them.
The bursting white blossoms
Seems hopeless miles away.
Pain filling you,
You find your way lightwards,
You lungs screeching in protest
From the blue ribs
All the way to the sun.
Finally you emerge,
Only to find another wave
Pushing you down
Every wall is still water
The surface too far away
The soft strings are filled
With excessive nourishment.
Your stubby bones are freezing
Ice crawling over them.
Pumping your body
Full of fear.
The seeds of despair
Have been planted in your body.
You pump upwards
For just one last chance--
But, trailing a tiny bit of joy,
A dream that may come true,
Which saves you from
Your nastiest thoughts.
Honourable Mention: Dawn and Dusk By Alisha Tsang (Gr. 6)
A shining sun
Gives way to
A glistening moon
It is as dark as chocolate cake
I would not say that
It is bright
Many
Not
One
Star shining from above
I can’t see in front of me
Not that
It is very bright
Sleepy
I am not
Ready to start
Honourable Mention: Vampirism by Chloe Ren (Gr. 7)
This is the end
There’s no way out
Chased down a dark alleyway
A shadowy figure pursues me
Caught in a trap
Leaping through the night
Fear courses through me
Then I see it
I find a bright streetlamp
The road is well lit
I’m at my house door
I traverse the stairs
Safety by the fireplace
Honourable Mention: Summer By Matthew Zhang (Gr. 7)
I hate summer
And don’t even try to convince me that
It's the best season
I’m always sweating
In the heat
When school’s off in the summer
I can freely wander with my friends
When the heat outside sizzles the patio and
With the air conditioners broken,
All we can do is just to sit there and
I try to enjoy my melted ice cream cone
While shooing annoying bees away
When I can go to sleep later than usual in the summer
I usually end up with
A headache which
Is totally my favourite thing to do on break with
Mosquitoes trying to suck my blood
It really sucks
And you're never gonna hear me say that
I love summer